Month: February 2024

Persuasive Writing Paragraph

My cousin got diagnosed with cancer. And If I don’t save him I’m going to die of sadness. According to the doctor, he has stage 4 cancer, and only has 5 days to live and by the time it’s 1 day left he can choose if he wants to get cured or not. I hope he will get cancer treatment and be fine. I saw that he had lost a bit of hair last time I saw him. I want him  to not be in pain or him to die. It’s been 3 days and I have visited him, he was bald, and it made me worried and I can’t help but cry to see him like this. Please donate to my charity to help me get the cure for his cancer. Donate by texting the amount you want to donate to this number: 0800 976 324.

 

We are learning about persuasive writing. I had to write this in literacy today, in this paragraph I have used Exaggeration and repetition.

Camp Goal Setting

On Tuesday, 13th February, Tangaroa (My class) is going to Spencer park for a 1 night camp. We have to show our RISE values.

Resilience (The ability to bounce back from difficult challenges if they are hard) I will show this by getting back on track if I am tired from the bike ride to Spencer Park.

Integrity (Being Honest) I will show this by not lying to anyone.

Success (The accomplishment of an aim) I will do this by giving a go at all the activities and trying to finish them even if they’re hard.

Empathy (The ability to sense other peoples emotions and don’t put them down) I will show this by not talking or being loud when everyone is trying to sleep.