Over the greenery on the mountains there was a castle in the gloomy fog.The castle had a gigantic arrow pointing to a hand with an air balloon hovering over. I think the hand was a giants hand but it doesn’t seem to be moving so it might just be a rock. I smell smoke or fog, I wonder why its foggy up here and smokey like I’ve just been in a fire. The amount of boulders and rocks falling down the hills was unreal, like a natural disaster is approaching. There was people stranded in the castle and a whole crowd of people rushing to the air balloon hoping they will get in. They rush and rush and push but yet they don’t know its not gonna get them anywhere. They try to dodge all of the rocks and boulders crashing down the hills like zebras rushing through the valley if there was a tribe of lions.
Nice work Lachie. I read the whole thing and there were no Mistakes.